Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Descriptive Writing

        Water fight

My cousins and I were on my trampoline and got wet

As I got splashed. I got as cold as Ice.  When the water came at me I felt as afraid as a squirrel getting chased by a dog. I felt great when I got splashed.  I kind of wanted to stop because I was so cold.

“Finally we are dry after that”

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