The Accident
Today the year is 1943 the air is freezing and I'm luckily in a nice house right next to the fire.
I get my scarf and coat on and I slowly walk outside so I don't make a mistake and slip over because the ground is coated in snow. As I take a step outside I feel like I'm going to fall but I keep walking. As soon as I got to the driveway of an old grumpy man's house; BANG! I'm on the ground, the wet freezing ground.I scream ‘’My arm it’s broken’’. I got someone to call the ambulance.
10 minutes later…
The ambulance got here. I got picked up and put on a stretcher and in the ambulance I went to the hospital. Once I got there they put me in a room and then they said my arm was broken and would take a whole year to heal up.They also put a cast on me I felt as if I would die then I was out of that weird hospital.That was painful I said to myself. At least you’re still alive, my roaring friend said.
1 year later..
I go back to the hospital and get my cast removed.’’I'M FREE AGAIN’’ I yell.I bolt home and go back. All of the snow is gone now. I can't slip on the snow again.
*It’s started snowing again,*
Well I just won't go outside.
Kia ora Jordyn,
ReplyDeleteIt looks like you've been doing alot of writing recently, and hearing your story is pretty fun to read, and reminds me of writing a narrative like I always did, and the courageous ending was a good ending for me to witness, especially if I haven't broken a arm before.
Quick question, have you yourself broken a bone, or was this an idea that popped into your head whilst writing like most authors do?
I'd enjoy hearing your opinion.
Kind regards,
Nikita.
yes it was just a idea that popped into my head,I have not broken a bone before
DeleteHello Jordyn,
ReplyDeleteGreat piece of writing.
It encourages me to write a story.
I think If i wrote a story it would be about accidently crasing a plane and surviving ?
What do you think Of my idea?
My only tip is make it more discriptive.
Kind regards
Alan
Thats a really good idea I think you should write about it and post it on your blog so I can read It😄
Delete-Jordyn