Hello Jordyn, My name is Alan and I am from yaldhurst model school. I really liked your blog post. I really liked DLO showed all the information of your lockdown work.
Maybe you can improve by writing something in the beginning like ' Hello my name is .......This is a DLO about all my lockdown ' work, Hope you like it.'
Hello Jordyn,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Alan and I am from yaldhurst model school. I really liked your blog post. I really liked DLO showed all the information of your lockdown work.
Maybe you can improve by writing something in the beginning like ' Hello my name is .......This is a DLO about all my lockdown ' work, Hope you like it.'
Kind regards
Alan
Hey Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI am Mykiala from Yaldhurst Model School!
This is a amazing blog post.
I liked how you showed us in the DLO what you did in lockdown.
Maybe you can improve by writing something at the top like hi I am... today I am going to be doing... and so on.
Anyway great job!
Kind Regards,
MYKIALA YMS!!